After reading this, i feel empty... I guess it didn't make a connection to me.. sigh
tbh, i didn't really care for the first story.cute and fluff bores me, i really loved the second one though. opposite to many readers it seems, i loved the angst and i was rooting for hira.i loved how he was able to let go quietly and maturely. teru's character just felt too one dimensional and unconvincing like the author didn't spend much time on him and he was just there forstory's sake as cute family, period
you guys are getting it wrong....kishi...because of his trauma of being left alone he had this eerie habit of checking on teru and as time goes he confuses this for love.....but then it proves that its not since he affirmed that he is relaxed just seeing teru there(he fell asleep) even without having sex with him, meaning he does it just to appease his trauma...while as of hira its clear that hes becoming conscious of his feelings ever since he tried repelling it....(being conscious of peoples feelings are usually a start for feelings such as love :) )
Your totally correct
The people who hate the second story only because Kishi ended up with Hira have poor taste. The only disappointment was no 3p and no older male tricking his cute cousin into sex.
Wow, I really expected the second story to suck judging by the comments on it but I thought it was really good. The comments seem a little narrow-minded but I think that the Kishi who was traumatized and needed to depend on someone just couldn't differentiate his different feelings of love. I think Teru is a possibility for him but soon Hira became someone important to him. Happens all the time. As for those calling Hira an overly-sexualized or "whore" type character, I feel like it belittles the what Hira himself has gone through. ***SPOILERS*** He got kicked out of his house for not making it into the right high school and so he (a fifteen year old child) made a decision that might seem drastic and unreasonable (prostitution). However I don't think that necessitates that he is unpure or that he is meant to be a foil for Teru. If anything Teru seemed a little more willful. So I agree with Janjan and Jade's comments. It's totally worth the read.
i read the whole story without reading any comment and i have to say i really do hate the second story. i appreciate ur honest opinion though, but still it really did break my heart just reading those kind of stories
I've always hated stories with plot like the second story. It makes me wanna kill myself because they never find the courage to confess to whom they really love.
I didn't like Kishi's character. The way he treated Teru and Teru's family is hypocritical. It was amply implied Kishi had a lust for Teru -the way he looked or doing peeping Tom, which goes beyond family love.
didn't like 2nd story. i don't find teru's portrayal realistic; is high schooler that innocent and clueless these days? no way. mangaka wanted contrast between teru and hira (typical binarism innocent virgin vs. whore) but it was not persuasive.
'a bus to hell' sounded so serious I didn't expect the story to be this cute. And smex scenes were a delightful bonus (those are very sexy). Liked the 1st couple a lot.
bottom line is..... that my feeling after reading the second story is pretty sad i hate the story and looks like im not the only one.. and just that it gives me a sad feeling like i didn't want it to be like that and such.. hmm... odd really i hated it I'm so unhappy with it.
I love both stories. The first one is funny and sweet. I don't know why people hated the second story but for me I think it's wonderfully written. I was moved by it. I like Hira's maturity, he loved Kishi so much that he's willing to let go of him. I would've liked more chapters for them or even just an extra but it is already perfect the way it ended. I would recommend this to people who like stories that are realistic with characters that are likeable.
I didn't really like the second story it's annoying. Sorry to all of u who likes the second story.
Well I think Kishi love for Teru was just out of gratitude, seeing as he was abandoned by his family Teru became a source to a place he could belong to as family. Meanwhile Hira turned out to be a different kind of love, one that bring him security, and stability and a sense of being lovers.
i loved the stories, in the first one i just didn't like the lie the seme told at the begining, but they make a very cute couple. The second story, i like how it ended. i mean they were good too each other, and they already had a sexual relationship so it was the next step to take. and i like how the cousin was clueless to what was going on.
I really liked the 2nd story :)
my god, the readers here are so immature-.- Kishi ended up with Hira because he loved Hira...He loved Teru as well but only as family. Why Hira a "slut" or "bitch" just cause the ending didn't go as you wanted?
Ok I guess the right word is prostitute^^ I mean I liked the story but he really sold himself. So don't be to harsh on people.
The last story i really hope to see kishi-teru pair, but now its nothing but a pile of dust T-T
I really liked 2nd story
I love the first story from the very first page it was graet
I fucking love the 1st story *0* The second story kinda..I stopped reading in the middle of it :S
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