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At its finest... I wanted to see that sex scene. It looks like it would have been hot as hell what with the scratch marks down his back and the hickeys on Meili. Ah well, I guess I gotta use my imagination to replace the cut out sex scene.
It feels like the two chapters aren't really chapters just trailers to what is going to happen in the story. Personally, what was just thrown at the reader should have a bit more of a build-up in some way or told differently as to not confuse the reader too much.