I am a huge fan of the Harry potter series, and I ship a lot of different ships in it, but (sorry) this is not one of them, the story was cute alone but I feel like the writer forgot he was basing it off of already made characters, I get that when your writing you should make the character your own, but at the same time, it still needs to be the original, also, I wish it would have some notice of lily. Well, that's only my opinion though
I am a huge fan of the Harry potter series, and I ship a lot of different ships in it, but (sorry) this is not one of them, the story was cute alone but I feel like the writer forgot he was basing it off of already made characters, I get that when your writing you should make the character your own, but at the same time, it still needs to be the original, also, I wish it would have some notice of lily. Well, that's only my opinion though