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i read the whole story without reading any comment and i have to say i really do hate the second story. i appreciate ur honest opinion though, but still it really did break my heart just reading those kind of stories
Wow, I really expected the second story to suck judging by the comments on it but I thought it was really good. The comments seem a little narrow-minded but I think that the Kishi who was traumatized and needed to depend on someone just couldn't differentiate his different feelings of love. I think Teru is a possibility for him but soon Hira became someone important to him. Happens all the time. As for those calling Hira an overly-sexualized or "whore" type character, I feel like it belittles the what Hira himself has gone through. ***SPOILERS***
He got kicked out of his house for not making it into the right high school and so he (a fifteen year old child) made a decision that might seem drastic and unreasonable (prostitution). However I don't think that necessitates that he is unpure or that he is meant to be a foil for Teru. If anything Teru seemed a little more willful. So I agree with Janjan and Jade's comments. It's totally worth the read.