hm...i liked that one pretty much xD
I agree with Yezhik to an extent, I do think that the Seme (forgot his name) could have shown more love to the Uke, I also wasn't mad keen on Ch.5, mainly because of what the guy with the black hair did in the end with the teddy other than those 2 chapter I like them all, I'm not sure about those two though.
ch.4 was disgusting!!