It's not terrible, but Bluebeard was a really bad choice for adapting into a sweet fluffy story. For those not familiar with the original: MC has older sisters who all previously married Bluebeard and died mysteriously, when it's her turn to marry him she explores the castle and in the forbidden room she finds the murdered bodies of all her sisters. So yeah, bad choice for fluff.
Umm.. my focus isn’t actually stay in the story as I can’t really get my interests in the story and plot. It’s was too abrupt and end just like that. Anyway it’s supposed to be short story so maybe the author want to make it as short as possible. But still i like all the main characters they are all beautiful and good looking.