started with an intriguing premise but you can really tell this was supposed to be an anthology-- the main plot was over and done by the end of ch1, and though the following chapters were better placed, they still felt disconnected. I liked the mls character design but couldn't really get around the sa.
I guess it's cute on it's own way, but yk old bl have this thing called "I love you, let's sleep together" "ok, I suddenly love you too" in the first chp
Besides the lack of smut(yes, I said it lacks of it), I love the story. I like these series more than the one-shots of these author. I always keep wanting more from reading the one-shot only to move on to another one-shot which doesn't give me enough time to fall in love with the writing.
10/10 very cute and the story itself is just rlly well built hehe. Also, the mc and the seme are made for one another istg